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Zjie Admin
Number of posts : 227 Age : 33 Country : Singapore Registration date : 2007-05-09
| Subject: "XinPu" Demo by Zjie and .. Thu May 17, 2007 8:50 pm | |
| 心谱
[A1]
兩首傷心的曲 播放的爱情
是篇彈不完的距离
心谱写出承诺 代表你和我
过去不想面对的错
[B1]
感动画面累积成空虚
化成了灰烬
按下了静音
[CHORUS]
完美的相遇开始的爱情
弹奏的旋律出现了空隙
没有人说明 没有人聆听
执著使我没勇气相信
时间删除未写完的结局
冰冻了曾经珍惜的回忆
只剩下痕迹 只剩下伤心
编成让人心碎的插曲
[A2]
兩首傷心的曲 播放的爱情
发现完全无法延续
心谱到了尽头 休止符落后
再也没有曲能合奏
Well..i was quite upset about this song..feb in 2007 used to have this lyrics writing competition for Dason Tang's new song..and my friend got me to help her..
Well..when i first he first draft of lyrics she wrote herself..it was like no storyline..no meaning
And i help her to change almost 80% of what she wrote..she very motorbike..keep saying that all the sentences must rhyme..(becos usually only chorus rhyme can liao mah)
Well..my dictionary is limited..rhyming is complicated..so our final draft is the one i posted here..
Den before they day of submission..this was what she wrote on msn
"Okay I say this now, I'm sorry. I tell you first, I'm going to sound SUPER MEAN, cos I'm very pekchek now.
I entered this, not in the hope of winning, just for the fun of it, but I wanted to do this seriously. I sent you my first copy, because I wanted your opinions, I'm thankful for them on Saturday, but on Sunday morning when you sent me YOURS, I started getting pekchek because it's like now you wanted to rewrite my song. But I thought I read too much into it, so I proceeded with discussing with you.
I have to admite, on my conscience that you have been of a GREAT help.But now I look at the lyrics, how much of it is written by me? Even if the ideas were mine, you rewrote almost EVERYTHING.
& even if it's my last chance, I wanna take it, treasure it, & use it because I wanna try to incorporate my final gist of imagination, because I don't want it to become an entire ZJIE'S WORK. I'll be handing up my copy tomorrow, not a majorly editted one from the one we discussed, but around the same one, because your phrases, ideas have already been incorporated inside me, I have no way I can just throw away everything you've suggested to me. & for that, I cannot hand it up as MY work, but only as an OURS. PS: Okay last words, I'M SORRY. I'm grateful for your help, I'm creditting it, BUT I'M SORRY. "
Got the story?.. in the end..she told me that she did not get short-listed..废话
the link to that demo is below..the lalala~ freestyle is sang by the composer himself..and we got to write the lyrics for the competition
http://minorcrisis.net/files/demosong.mp3 | |
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cookiie Metal Doubled Sided Axe+
Number of posts : 158 Age : 33 Registration date : 2007-05-11
| Subject: Re: "XinPu" Demo by Zjie and .. Fri May 18, 2007 12:11 am | |
| i wanted to enter... den was so lazie hahaha but i lke that melody | |
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Zjie Admin
Number of posts : 227 Age : 33 Country : Singapore Registration date : 2007-05-09
| Subject: Re: "XinPu" Demo by Zjie and .. Fri May 18, 2007 9:58 am | |
| next time bah..still got opportunity de.. | |
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cookiie Metal Doubled Sided Axe+
Number of posts : 158 Age : 33 Registration date : 2007-05-11
| Subject: Re: "XinPu" Demo by Zjie and .. Fri May 18, 2007 11:02 am | |
| but u hor... also gt a bit wrong lehx ppl heartwork u change 80% of it of cox she angry lah no meaning to u maybe got meaning to her nwadea alot of songs also no meaning de mah~ cannt sae her motorbike she angrie veri normal de.... | |
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Zjie Admin
Number of posts : 227 Age : 33 Country : Singapore Registration date : 2007-05-09
| Subject: Re: "XinPu" Demo by Zjie and .. Fri May 18, 2007 11:09 am | |
| u noe arh..her english is wonderful..but her chinese is like a fool..(lol..i so evil..i sux)
She was the one who said that her lyrics got no storyline..aiya..and somemore we spend days editing until like 50:50..
but in the end...
aiya..heck care this liao la..history liao she still my friend la | |
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cookiie Metal Doubled Sided Axe+
Number of posts : 158 Age : 33 Registration date : 2007-05-11
| Subject: Re: "XinPu" Demo by Zjie and .. Fri May 18, 2007 2:05 pm | |
| lol hahaa u so bad sae her chinese arh~ lol i wrote songs too before.. i mean lyrics..but with fren come back le den i post | |
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cookiie Metal Doubled Sided Axe+
Number of posts : 158 Age : 33 Registration date : 2007-05-11
| Subject: Re: "XinPu" Demo by Zjie and .. Fri May 18, 2007 2:06 pm | |
| actualli lyrics nt onli nid meanings but also whether it sounds good tgt lke the ending of each sentence or blah balh | |
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FriendlyFoe Metal Doubled Sided Axe+
Number of posts : 152 Age : 33 Country : singapore Registration date : 2007-05-09
| Subject: Re: "XinPu" Demo by Zjie and .. Fri May 18, 2007 9:30 pm | |
| tong hua!! tts the only chinese song i like.. | |
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FriendlyFoe Metal Doubled Sided Axe+
Number of posts : 152 Age : 33 Country : singapore Registration date : 2007-05-09
| Subject: Re: "XinPu" Demo by Zjie and .. Fri May 18, 2007 9:31 pm | |
| can anyone translate for me the song 'tong hua'? | |
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ameliaZ Double Silver Axe
Number of posts : 84 Registration date : 2007-05-10
| Subject: Re: "XinPu" Demo by Zjie and .. Sat May 19, 2007 4:00 am | |
| i got ur story but i dono the song meaning. what's xin pu. wah lau.. my chinese more pro than her for sure one lor. | |
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Zjie Admin
Number of posts : 227 Age : 33 Country : Singapore Registration date : 2007-05-09
| Subject: Re: "XinPu" Demo by Zjie and .. Sat May 19, 2007 10:28 am | |
| xinpu means "heart score" since we got piano score..guitar score.. | |
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cookiie Metal Doubled Sided Axe+
Number of posts : 158 Age : 33 Registration date : 2007-05-11
| Subject: Re: "XinPu" Demo by Zjie and .. Sat May 19, 2007 7:08 pm | |
| lolx what u mean is lke ur heart playing a music telling a love story? | |
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Zjie Admin
Number of posts : 227 Age : 33 Country : Singapore Registration date : 2007-05-09
| Subject: Re: "XinPu" Demo by Zjie and .. Sat May 19, 2007 8:18 pm | |
| something like that lor.. tunes that only through heart can express | |
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FriendlyFoe Metal Doubled Sided Axe+
Number of posts : 152 Age : 33 Country : singapore Registration date : 2007-05-09
| Subject: Re: "XinPu" Demo by Zjie and .. Sat May 19, 2007 9:57 pm | |
| why chinese song are all so drama one?? tong hua, xinpu and all tt... so drama mama | |
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cookiie Metal Doubled Sided Axe+
Number of posts : 158 Age : 33 Registration date : 2007-05-11
| Subject: Re: "XinPu" Demo by Zjie and .. Sun May 20, 2007 5:34 am | |
| lol not drama is MEANINGFUL! | |
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Zjie Admin
Number of posts : 227 Age : 33 Country : Singapore Registration date : 2007-05-09
| Subject: Re: "XinPu" Demo by Zjie and .. Sun May 20, 2007 11:25 am | |
| - FriendlyFoe wrote:
- why chinese song are all so drama one??
tong hua, xinpu and all tt... so drama mama So that the whole song can be touching drama mama? "Shake it Mama Shake it" | |
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FriendlyFoe Metal Doubled Sided Axe+
Number of posts : 152 Age : 33 Country : singapore Registration date : 2007-05-09
| Subject: Re: "XinPu" Demo by Zjie and .. Sun May 20, 2007 3:18 pm | |
| so now i perceive that every chinese song is touching and meaningful la? | |
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Zjie Admin
Number of posts : 227 Age : 33 Country : Singapore Registration date : 2007-05-09
| Subject: Re: "XinPu" Demo by Zjie and .. Sun May 20, 2007 3:49 pm | |
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3CheersForSweetRevenge Double Stone Axe
Number of posts : 40 Age : 33 Registration date : 2007-05-18
| Subject: Re: "XinPu" Demo by Zjie and .. Mon May 21, 2007 1:58 am | |
| zjie the girl very chio issit. 80% LOL. alot leh. wa u jio charbo zai ar ^^ i startin respect u liao | |
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Zjie Admin
Number of posts : 227 Age : 33 Country : Singapore Registration date : 2007-05-09
| Subject: Re: "XinPu" Demo by Zjie and .. Mon May 21, 2007 7:25 am | |
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FriendlyFoe Metal Doubled Sided Axe+
Number of posts : 152 Age : 33 Country : singapore Registration date : 2007-05-09
| Subject: Re: "XinPu" Demo by Zjie and .. Wed May 30, 2007 2:06 am | |
| rong, which girl u talking abt? | |
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3CheersForSweetRevenge Double Stone Axe
Number of posts : 40 Age : 33 Registration date : 2007-05-18
| Subject: Re: "XinPu" Demo by Zjie and .. Wed May 30, 2007 2:31 am | |
| He aid the girl in the writing of the song lyrics. that girl | |
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